Monday, May 7, 2007

Fictional Foundation

Every hot female dominant utopia needs a society set up, a framework within which the stories can be told. I can imagine an industrious person spending many weeks creating a perfect or at least logical world.

Me, I spent a couple of evenings, and here's what I have. (The idea is that the stories I'm intending to post will take place within this framework. That's the idea today, a week from Tuesday we'll see what the idea is then.)

I expect to make some changes as stories come along.
some edits made, May 2008.

The Name
I can't stop myself from calling it UPtopia, an inside joke on my constant misspelling of the perfectly good "utopia". If I come to my senses and change the name, you'll be the first to know.

Edit - I've been able to resist so far. There's no name given, all together referred to vaguely as "the land".

Technology
The easiest thing to do is to give the society access to the same technology we've currently got available, more or less. This saves research, good, but limits the need for many sweaty male field slaves, bad. My cheat is to create several different societies within the utopia, each ritualistically embracing or allowing different technology levels, as it suits.


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The Three Classes

The Communities - the main population of the land lives in the communities. Both the men and the women there are the "underclass", as it relates to the powerful women up the food chain. The Communities are matriarchal, but not "hot femdom", i.e. there are no male slaves. People fall in love, get married, have families. Matriarchal, but not terribly different from an upside down 1950's, with a big twist.

The twist is, the male slaves for the women up the food chain are supplied by The Communities. Agreeing to enslavement by the ruling women is not only considered to be high service to the land, but also a support for the individual family. It's a crucial economic support (the men are purchased at a high price) and also the only way for a family to achieve status. A family that has had no men selected to serve is low status; a family that has a history of many men being selected to serve is high status.

The Communities have technology held back from them by the powers that be. (After all, keeping The Communities a bit economically depressed and somewhat downtrodden encourages the supply of men to keep flowing.) Somewhere around 1950 technology, I'm thinking. Definitely no computers or internet, definitely restrictions to mass communication.

Governing City - where the bureaucrats live. Everybody loves a hot bureaucrat story. This is a huge, modern to 2008, city with tall buildings and crowds of people. It is physically separated from The Communities and community people do not travel there. The women who populate the city are born to it. They are part of generations of women who have had this lot in life. They work hard, as business women and bureaucrats, facilitating major commerce and government functions.

This is the first place we find male slaves! Men are not married, they are purchased from The Communities. They aren't just purchased for hot and sexy reasons however (these are working women), they are also purchased to fill necessary job functions.

Who's getting the flowers on secretary's day now, baby?

Edit - Can't make the math work as originally conceived. The population isn't sustainable without families. The city has to be pretty darn big, as many as five million, to be the nexus of all the commerce and all government. It's reasonable for the birth rate to be low, but the women are still going to have a fair number of male children and they are without the economic or social incentive to support a society that encourages *their* adult male children to serve. So there are husbands in the city, and a woman could have a husband *and* a slave.

Being the husband of a city woman is a pretty cushy post. The men can't own property, they aren't going to have their own money, but a "to do" working woman isn't likely to want her husband working the more menial or lower paying jobs that are available to men. SO, there's "gentlemen who lunch", and run society events, and volunteer groups, and shuttle their child to school.

Also, there should be some emigration of community women to the city, the best and the brightest. And -- there are a ton of government workers who do stints in the communities, officiating officially official things.


Ruling Class - The Ruling Class puts the "hot" in Hot Female Dominant Utopia. These are the rulers of the land, by generations of birth. Each woman only gives birth to one female child, so the numbers of the ruling women never grow. (Exceptions for numbers of girl children born to replace children who die or if women die before they give birth, yada yada.)

This is a small, closed society, that controls the vast, and I mean vast, percentage of the wealth in the land. About 100 ruling families with one woman each on the council. Each woman has as many as 50 slaves, depending on her wealth and desire.

edit: brought the number of slave up to fifty, mostly because fifty is a nice word and flowed into a few story sentences well. Twenty-five is hyphenated. Hyphenated words don't flow!

Ritual is high. Male enslavement and service is an integral part of the ritual. The Ruling Class embraces and eschew technological advances available to the lower classes depending on council vote, and according to ritual. So, you could find motor cars alongside ritual carriages being drawn by, you guessed it, hot and sweaty men. Being selected for enslavement to the Ruling Class is the highest compliment paid to a man, and the highest status granted to his family back in The Communities. Unfortunately, the culture and ritual is rather cruel, and a man who agrees to be enslaved has made a great sacrifice.

edit: backing away from any motor cars in the ruling class. The sound of engines isn't working for me. Modern indoor plumbing and electricity, for sure. Motors, not so much.


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And one more thing to know about:

The Sons of Class - It wouldn't be fair to have a Hot Female Dominant Utopia without some free, opinionated men running about. The Sons of Class are the sons of the Ruling Class women. The aren't raised by the Ruling Class but are instead sent to The Communities to be raised with a unique status. They are free to do and say pretty much whatever they want. They can't get married, but they can't be enslaved either. They are provided for, so they don't have to work. They become the artists, writers, musicians, etc., of the land and I'd imagine, on more than one occasion, a burr in the saddle of the Ruling Class.

Just so everything is fair.

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Now, the only thing left to do is finish my first story. I'm nearly there, but with the pesky day job, it might take a couple of days for me to get it posted.
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edit: left open military defense (current thinking women working with high technology + a much lower percentage of slaves), and the entire legal system including police.



20 comments:

Bitchy Jones said...

I love this.

I am already looking forward to the episode where the guy from the sons of class gets mistaken for a slave and whipped and forced and coerced until eventually they find out who he is and go to set him free but he begs to stay a slave because he loves it.

When's that one on?

Elizabeth said...

lol, I'm with you, I think I already have that half plotted somewhere in my brain.

I'm a little tingly about The Sons of Class addition. The set up here contains pieces of a couple of different Utopias I've written in the past, but this is the first time The Sons of Class have made an appearance.

They are a wild card that can be pulled out for any number of reasons, at any time.

I'm also happy about the three different settings that allow for really *any* kind of female dominant porn I mean erotica. First time I ever put them all together.

If I cut out sleeping, eating and working, we'd have lots of great stuff in no time.

(BTW, you realize that a normal person sets up a story site to publish stuff they have *already written* and have stored up! What was I thinking?)

Cay Reet... said...

I find the Sons of Class quite interesting as an idea, too. They'll work good as a wild card and might be worked out (as a group or some individuals) for other things as well. How about a few revolutionaries (who don't make a change, of course)?

As far as setting up a site for things written already: I've done that ... and I have a second domain I should be setting up, but don't get around doing stuff for - so you're not the only one who gets public space without something to fill it.

Tom Allen said...

Hey, wait a minute! Where's the smokin' hawt women in uncomfortable leather gear? Where are the thigh boots with the 6" spiked high heels? Where are the men dressed as frilly housemaids? And the strap-ons? How the hell can you be femdoms without the strap-ons?

*grumbles*

Next thing, you'll be telling me that the men have to do all the yard work.

Bitchy Jones said...

Can I buy Tom?

Tom Allen said...

Can I buy Tom?

No chance of me being one of those "sons of class" guys, eh?

Dang.

Bitchy Jones said...

Oh, Tom, you know all the Sons of Class just wish they were hot slaves.

Maybe when Elizabeth gets in she'll start the auction, or something

Tom Allen said...

I'm a balding, slightly chubby (I prefer "comfortable"), 48 year old middle-aged wise-ass. Of course I wish I was a hot slave!

Hell, right now I'm just embarrassed that E is only going to get about three dollars and change for me.

Elizabeth said...

LOL you people. I barely know where to start.

How about I start at the bottom of the comments and go backwards?

Tom, darling, experience is valued in Hot Female Dominant Utopia. (Okay, hard, sweaty 28 year old bodies are valued pretty highly, true....) Let's not forget Christopher Meloni is 46 and balding. (Wait, wrong blog, dammit, this two blog thing is going to get confusing.)


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Auctioning Tom off: I'm all for it, but he does have to do yard work. I'm happy to bid. I can write myself in more money than anybody else has, so I'll probably win, too.

Bitchy, you can have him on Tuesdays when I am otherwise occupied.

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Tom, regarding your notes on what appears to be missing in HFDU. I have bad news, bad news, bad news and good news.

1) uncomfortable leather clothing for the women, nope

2) thigh high boots, nope

3) sissy maids, nope

4) strap-ons, hang around, this ain't Bitchy's fiction ;)

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Cay - what a most intelligent and non-bawdy comment you have left. I'm really looking forward to reading your fiction!!

(I'll also answer you over on the other comment in a bit, might not get to it in the few minutes I'm grabbing on the computer right now.)

Love you all for playing along with me! :)

E

Bitchy Jones said...

Clearly we should get Christopher Meloni to play Tom in the TV adaptation.

Elizabeth said...

Hello, yes, I might have thought of Christopher Meloni starring in the HBO series.

And it's so an HBO series.... possibly Showtime actually. Hmmm, I think it would fit Showtime better.

I'd have to subscribe. "Hot Female Dominant Utopia" on Showtime, this thing would kill. (And Meloni's proven he gets naked as a jaybird on cable.)

Damn. Wrong blog again.

John Thomas said...

There would forever be an uneasy cold war between the slave-owning women and the sons of class.

Elizabeth said...

Hi John -

Absolutely. That's becoming my favorite thing, but not what I should write on first.

The weekend is finally here. I'll be posting something ***shortly***.

Thanks, E

Intellectual said...

Woohoo, sounds good so far. I'm looking forward to reading more. I just hope you don't abandon your stories (like I have a tendency to do).

Elizabeth said...

Intellectual -

Send me good vibes. I'm not the most reliable at things like this, so I need your good vibes.

Thank you so much!

E

Omnivore said...

Elizabeth, I just found this through Bitchy (font of all good femdom on the web). I can't wait to read more. And more. Adding it to my RSS feed right now.

Maybe we could sell the story line to Kink.com and finally get some decent femdom pr0n! OMG, I'd totally help you write that screenplay.

But I'm getting ahead of myself.

::sends you the good fairy of writer's flow (that's the opposite of writer's block::

Mighty Fast Pig said...

History is full of examples of the ruling class wearing less comfortable and practical clothing than the subordinate classes. (It's only in the last 200 years or so that upper-class men have been dressing down.)

So it isn't implausible that ruling class women in HFDU would wear fetish attire, if only for particular social and ceremonial events. Boots could be holdovers from mounted warriors, leather or latex suggestive of body armor. Even corsets could serve as proud display and enhancement of the female form. Women of Minoan Crete wore makeup and corsets and they were economically, politically and physically active in their society.

Elizabeth said...

Dear Mighty Fast Pig -

Ouch, your comment kind of made me cringe. I realize that you're approaching this from a perspective about what might or might not be possible in *somebody's* HFDU, but I'll tell you that it's not possible in the HFDU on these pages.

Women locked in "Fetish attire" does not equal *Utopia*, unless it's the Utopia of someone who *likes* women locked in fetish attire.

This happens a lot with guys who are into the idea of women being dressed in fetish attire for the guy's enjoyment. They have a hard time realizing that it's for the guy...and the whole point of this HFDU is that it's about the woman. You aren't used to seeing dominant female sexuality being about the woman online, that's why it's hard to take that leap.

I get it. It's still a "yowch" when I hear it.

hugs, E

Tom Allen said...

Women locked in "Fetish attire" does not equal *Utopia*, unless it's the Utopia of someone who *likes* women locked in fetish attire.

::perk::

Ooohh!

::looks around::

Oh. Er, forgot where I was for a moment. sry kthxbai

Mighty Fast Pig said...

Dear Elizabeth:

I think I overstepped my bounds, trying to suggest a rewrite towards my fantasies as well as critiquing the plausibility of your society. I should set up my own blog if I want to do that. Pardon me.

Incidentally, have you read the short stories of Tammyjo Eckhart? She writes femdom erotica that is definitely not "male gaze".